Dear Sir,
I hope your day is going great. I am writing this letter to make a complaint about the poor condition of the road in my area. After the Christmas holidays, the potholes on the road became worse. There is a very big crack that divided the road at Justice junction, and the biggest pothole on the road is right Infront of Winners Chapel.
The bad state of the road causes a lot of traffic for residents since it is the only road that leads to Agbama Housing Estate. In addition, this daily gridlock on my road affects me personally because I have to drop my kids at school before I start going to my workplace. For this reason, I am always late to work.
However, I suggest that there should be gutters on both sides of the road so that water can be channeled out properly. Also, filling the potholes would not solve this issue, so I am suggesting that the road should be worked upon from the scratch. I believe my opinion will create a long lasting solution to the road in my area, and residents would not be inconvenienced by the bad roads anymore.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Adam.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41262135922 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34389623527 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587378640777 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7922137044 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6363636364 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239087645784 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892790112412 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700180669645 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130739173181 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871035857403 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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