In our world today, there are some people who believe that people learn more from their failure than from their success. However, I partially agree and disagree, and I will explain further in the body paragraphs.
To begin with, when individual people fail, they gain great knowledge from this experience. The reason this happens is that the hurt that they feel when they lose turn out to be a landmark that helps in their learning experience. In the eastern part of Nigeria, for instance, statistics shows that if a child in primary school fails an exam, the shame and hurt they experience when their classmates find out about their performance make them more knowledgeable and committed on how to succeed next time they resit the examination. Therefore, given that individuals fail in various attempts to do some things, they will learn from that failure.
On the contrary, as long as citizens of a country succeed when they engage in various activities, it is a fact that they will definitely learn from their success. The reason is that succeeding at something will give you more insight regarding it, and will even create the zeal within you to seek more knowledge concerning the experience. For example, statistics shows that athletes in the southern part of Abia State in Nigeria learn from their success, every time, and this makes them to get better after each game they participate in. Thus, if everybody succeeds in what they get involved in, then there is no doubt that they will lean from that successful feat.
To cap it all, individual people will become more knowledgeable anytime they fail at something bcause of the hurt which drives them to learn and become better, yet it is factual that they will learn given that they succeed at whatever activities they might come across.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, no doubt, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 51.0 24.0651302605 212% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94754098361 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49278669119 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1464690811 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.181818182 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258396726506 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121621265603 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101288508139 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191394303891 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115942362499 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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