The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action

Dear Sir

I'm writing this letter with regards to the environmental pollution on my street. Ututu is the largest street in the city of Umuahia and is comprised of over 100 buildings but we have very few dumpsters to accommodate the daily wastes from the residents.

Due to very few dumpsters available, wastes are littered all over the place. We also have different spots where piles of refuse can be seen and this is the cause of the major traffic we experience everyday. The environment has become very unhealthy for residents because of the bad odour that comes from the piled trash. Since the refuse company doesn't clear the dumpster daily, the pile up of daily wastes from people breeds mosquitoes and this infects the residents.

I'd suggest that more dumpsters should be made available to accommodate the daily wastes. I'd also suggest that the refuse disposal company should employ more staff so they can be able to take away wastes from the area daily.

I hope you act on this as soon as possible.

Yours Faithfully,

Adam Grant

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94972067039 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46504858569 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625698324022 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3897393245 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.7 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147463161823 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635569816073 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491416085633 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105395577729 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521775496659 0.0580467560999 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.