There are a lot of people who prefer giving money as a gift rather than buying some items. This has become a trend because of the influx of individuals that indulge in the said act. Below, I will state my reasons to this effect!
First, when individuals give money instead of gifts, it helps in saving time that would have been spent going to purchase a particular item from a store. For instance, the CEO of a company needs to get a gift for his best performing staff because of the birthday of the staff that is coming up. In this case, the Chief Executive Officer will send money through cash transfer rather than going to get a specific gift, while also saving time in the process. Technology has done us good, right?
Second, sending cash and not sending things will save the embarrassing situations where a gift gotten would not be liked or appreciated by the recipient. To illustrate, a Non Governmental Organization walks into the home of less privileged kids and gives them monetary support after hearing about them in the area. Despite the positive achievement, this act has saved the NGO the embarrassment of buying things that would not be needed at that time.
Third, most people prefer receiving money, so this is indeed a positive development for the giver who prefers giving cash. People of this order make giving easy whenever givers are trying to appreciate them. For example, in Michael's family, the eldest son prefer you give him money unless it is not possible at the moment, but can be done later on.
In conclusion, I believe that this trend is positive because it is a win-win situation. Giving money will save time, embarrassing situations and benefit those whose desires are to be giving cash instead of gifts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77227722772 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51146224846 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2325411414 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313219468483 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10778303872 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829079941962 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182312171846 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839775544261 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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