System for rubbish collection is not working in your area and causing problems to u and your neighbors
Describe how rubbish collection is not working properly
Explain how it is affecting you and your neighbors
Suggest what should be done to solve this problem
Dear Sir,
I would like to bring to your notice that the system used for garbage collection on Cathay Street number twenty is not working properly due to which the we and our neighbors are facing serious issues. Previously the garbage collection van used to come daily except on Sundays however, nowadays the van is not coming frequently to collect the garbage on a regular basis due to which there is a heap of waste material outside our home which is where the garbage bin is located. There is foul smell in the vicinity of this dustbin and mosquitoes in this area which remains a constant threat for causing health issues such as dengue and malaria. Recently one of my neighbors was diagnosed with dengue due to increasing number of mosquitoes caused due to all the rubbish which remains collected on this street.
I request you to look into this matter and inquire that why the garbage collecting van is constantly skipping this street due to which the residents of this area are suffering. I hope that you will help the residents of Cathay Street by solving this problem that is posing a serious threat to the health of the people living in vicinity.
Regards
Ankita Agarwal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'we'?
Suggestion: the; we
...ty is not working properly due to which the we and our neighbors are facing serious is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75362318841 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40027109176 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.1502760115 44.8134815571 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.571428571 76.5299724578 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 16.8248392259 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222509831932 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098268783254 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642293953369 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167392247284 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389208323023 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.