You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
Currently there is a contentious argument over whether paying taxes is necessary or people should be allowed complete tax exemption. General population paying for the taxes is considered as a responsibility of the citizens for their country. I totally disagree that people should be allowed to save the money they earn without paying the required taxes. In this essay I will elaborate that why I believe that a part of money from all the citizens should be collected for the benefit of the nation.
Beyond any qualms there are myriads of rationale reasons that prove that economic growth of nations is dependent on the hard work of the citizens and the resulting tax collected from them. All government services starting from public transportation to public healthcare are totally dependent on the money which is collected from the taxes. If general population suddenly decides to stop paying taxes than they lose the right to avail all the essential public services. For example, countries such as India where tax slab is less remains a developing nation even today whereas, Canada is a developed country because people pay high taxes.
On the contrary, some people believe that government should not have the right to demand the tax amount from the citizens. However, I believe that it is the government of the country who is responsible for maintaining the law and order of the country. Availing national services by citizens cannot be dependent upon private companies who are profit oriented. Government services are managed in such a way that they provide tax benefit services to people irrespective of profitability. For instance, a government hospital will continue to run irrespective of profit or loss.
In conclusion, I believe that paying taxes to government is beneficial for the citizens and economic growth of the nation as well. It is a true saying that as you sow so shall you reap. Therefore, one cannot expect economic enrichment without paying for the facilities from their own pocket money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...oney which is collected from the taxes. If general population suddenly decides to ...
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Line 2, column 524, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun remains is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...untries such as India where tax slab is less remains a developing nation even today ...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...not be dependent upon private companies who are profit oriented. Government services ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10909090909 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77850201762 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484848484848 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9123720223 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.375 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8125 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234601169966 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086745058676 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746410426184 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15109877694 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761251704188 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.