The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly.
Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours.
Suggest what should be done about the problem.
Dear Sir or Madam,
This letter has been written to drag your attention towards a waste aggregating process in a Downtown area which is not functioning appropriately
The containers which are being used for debris collection is completely broken. Moreover, now the people are throwing the litters openly on the ground and it is impossible for residents to pass through this zone.
The poor redolent from the waste makes hard for me and my adjoining masses to live in this region. In addition, the mosquitos are always flying on the discarded matter which is a cause of spreading malaria and dengue as last year many death reports had been reported due to this critical illness.
It would be highly appreciated if you will resolve this issue as soon as possible by substituting the old broken bins with new ones which has open and close lid. Furthermore, send your workers immediately to collect whole scrap from the ground and tell them the procedure of incineration.
Hope you will keep my recommendations under consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Johnson Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24431818182 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83642828452 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.715909090909 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1042798561 44.8134815571 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198709144765 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783528400065 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537163548072 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908319685005 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438189681574 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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