You are going on a short training course at a collage in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. You need somewhere to live while you are there.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter,
• explain your situation
• describe the accommodation you require
• say when you will need it
Dear Sir,
My name is Harsimran Singh. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am going to join a 3 months trainee course started by your college in Greenmount, Northern Ireland. As I have already gone through your course curriculum but there is nothing mentioned about accommodation and that is the thing which I am anxious.
What I am looking for is the independent room with attached bathroom and kitchen. It would be better if it is near my trainee college otherwise try to find accommodation within few kilometers where public transport is easily accessible do that I can reach the college on time.
I would be very grateful to you if you can find such accommodation within the time or before my arrival. Your trainee course is going to start on the 15th of August and I will be there on the 13th of August. It would be a great help if you arrange a nice accommodation for me before the 13th of August.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Harsimran Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'nice accommodation'.
Suggestion: nice accommodation
...It would be a great help if you arrange a nice accommodation for me before the 13th of August. I ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 827.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62011173184 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71004429194 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59217877095 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3849183784 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232140506249 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921828879698 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771114818374 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133640217611 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807062019552 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.