The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors.Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:- Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working

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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors.

Write a letter to the local council. In your letter:

- Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
- Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbors
- Suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to address the current issue in my neighbourhood regarding the garbage collection system. We believe there may be room for improvements if we can pay enough attention to the issue.

First of all, the rubbish is collected only once in two days which is not an appropriate schedule for this busy area. As result, there are some days the street are flooded with household waste. Moreover, the garbage trucks are making lots of uncomforable noise whenerver they are operating. Consequently, we have to experience terrible noise pollution, especially for families with infants. As you know, they get startled easily and cried when they hear the old-machine running.

I hope this letter might find you in the city council well so you can help us overcome this situation. Would you please increase the frequency of the garbage collection schedule to once a day so that the trash can be properly collected without making bad image for the neighbourhood? Another suggesion is to upgrading the vehicle to a better model so they can run more smoothly.

We are much appreciated if you can listen to our proposal.

Kind regards
Brian

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, well, you know, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 987.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01015228426 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77913102879 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659898477157 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6364185331 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.25 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201702613268 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623407361848 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639413424133 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111355063699 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518069883386 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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