The table compares how much money secondary/high school teachers paid between five different countries, namely Australia, Denmark, Luxembourg, Korea and Japan in 2009.
Overall, it can be seen that the salary of teachers in Luxembourg was the highest in all three categories. In addition, in Australia and Denmark, it would take lesser years for teachers to get to their highest number of earnings.
It is clear that the starting for teachers in both Korea and Japan were the lowest compared to the others, ranging from 28,500 to 30,500 US dollars. However, these numbers climbed up dramatically in the yearly salary after 15 years, especially when they reached their highest earnings at 84,500 US dollars for Korea and 62,000 US dollars for Japan.
The initial salary for Australia and Denmark however were higher than Korea and Japan at 34,600 US dollars and 47,000 US dollars respectively. In contrast to this, while their maximum salary weren’t as many as Korea and Japan, it would take more years for Korean and Japanese teachers to get to their top earnings. Additionally, 37 years for Korea and 34 years for Japan.
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The table below shows the salaries of secondary high school teachers in 2009 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, while, in addition, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05913978495 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5912026429 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569892473118 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6786441118 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.625 76.5299724578 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153553514683 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778464222926 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860036091392 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122972120645 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995695272528 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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