The table below shows the salaries of secondary high school teachers in 2009

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The table below shows the salaries of secondary/high school teachers in 2009.

The table compares how much salary to be offered for secondary teachers in 2009.
Overall, teacher salary levels across 5 countries depended on where they work and their years of experience. Besides, Australia was the country that offered the lowest salary for teachers.
Commencing at $80.000, Luxembourg was the best-paying place of teacher employment, which was nearly three times Australian teachers’ entry salary. After 15 years, the salaries of teachers in both Australia and Luxembourg rose, with $48.000 and $119.000 respectively. Luxembourgish teachers were required 30 years to reach the maximum salary, at $48.000. It took Australian teachers 9 years to earn $48.000, which was the maximum salary.
The starting payment of teachers in Japan, Korea was $34.000, $30.000 respectively. After 15 years, teachers in Japan were doubled paid, while in Korea the salaries of teachers increased by one and a half. The Japanese teachers’ prerequisite to receiving $86.000 was having 37 years of experience. Teachers in Korea spent 34 years earning the maximum salary, at $62.000. The starting salary of teachers in Denmark was $45.000. After 15 years, the salary their up to $54.000, which was also the maximum salary after 8 years.

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Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29381443299 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72126383553 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546391752577 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.6004713623 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206415390411 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102162910792 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759633769983 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175053209606 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0960137159613 0.0580467560999 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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