The tabular give information about sales of firetrade lablled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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The tabular give information about sales of firetrade- lablled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The tabular charts depicts information about sales two things fairtade - labelled coffee and bananas in comparison of 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Overall, the most striking fact emerged from the table chart, Switzerland was maximum sailing of coffee in 1999, while Sweden had sold lowest in same years. Sailing of Bananas, Switzerland was maximum and Belgium was minimal. In 2004 sailing both things were increasing.
To begin with, sailing of coffee in 1999 and 2004 such as 1.5 and 200 million of euros, why in same years Switzerland was almost double in between 4 years from 2 to 6 millions of euros. However, Denmark was selling 1 million of euros 1.7 in year of 1999 and 2004. The lowest sold coffee by Sweden 0.8 and 0.1 million of euros. finally, just 0.7 millions of euros was increasing in Belgium from 1 to 1.7 million of Euros.

According to the charts, sailing of Bananas, it was more than coffee in these all country. 1999 Switzerland has been sold 15 millions of euros bananas, next 5 years more than three times like 47 million of euros. Additionally, Sweden and Denmark sold 1.8 and 2 millions of euros Bananas in 1999, also selling of bananas were declined just 1 and 0.9 in 2004. Lastly,the UK sold bananas 1 million of euros in same year and next 5 years was more than 5 times like 55.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'depict'.
Suggestion: depict
The tabular charts depicts information about sales two things fair...
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Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...egin with, sailing of coffee in 1999 and 2004 such as 1.5 and 200 million of eur...
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Line 4, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ith, sailing of coffee in 1999 and 2004 such as 1.5 and 200 million of euros, wh...
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Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '6 million'.
Suggestion: 6 million
...ost double in between 4 years from 2 to 6 millions of euros. However, Denmark was selling 1 m...
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Line 4, column 329, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...by Sweden 0.8 and 0.1 million of euros. finally, just 0.7 millions of euros was increas...
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Line 4, column 345, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '7 million'.
Suggestion: 7 million
...d 0.1 million of euros. finally, just 0.7 millions of euros was increasing in Belgium from 1 ...
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Line 6, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...n of Euros. According to the charts, sailing of Bananas, it was more than cof...
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Line 6, column 124, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '15 million'.
Suggestion: 15 million
...country. 1999 Switzerland has been sold 15 millions of euros bananas, next 5 years more than t...
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Line 6, column 261, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '2 million'.
Suggestion: 2 million
...onally, Sweden and Denmark sold 1.8 and 2 millions of euros Bananas in 1999, also selling of ...
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...9, also selling of bananas were declined just 1 and 0.9 in 2004. Lastly,the UK so...
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Suggestion: , the
...declined just 1 and 0.9 in 2004. Lastly,the UK sold bananas 1 million of euros in ...
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...y,the UK sold bananas 1 million of euros in same year and next 5 years was more t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, lastly, so, while, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 26.3917525773 167% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44444288974 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.622605031667 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7742783561 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192168554525 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905346100046 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120029565148 0.0603063233224 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176480331031 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167214777887 0.0580467560999 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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