Talk about your ambitions for the next ten years

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 81, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun outdoors is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... a good job which work more indoors and less outdoors because I dont like hot and ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ore indoors and less outdoors because I dont like hot and crowed. At this time, ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Crowed
...utdoors because I dont like hot and crowed. At this time, i think work is very imp...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... like hot and crowed. At this time, i think work is very important. I need mo...
^
Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
...ly and earn a living. I will try my best. Next I want to take my family travel a...
^^^^
Line 7, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Would
...my family really love traveling. We would like to travel twice a year and spend l...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...k together. I think it very interesting.In the future I want to buy a furnishe...
^^
Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furnished
...sting.In the future I want to buy a furnished house with a big garden because my fami...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ry morning, we can eat breakfast in the garden and enjoy fresh air which help w...
^^^
Line 13, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...d when I am ready, Moreover, I want to open my own restaurant because i love f...
^^
Line 13, column 36, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t to open my own restaurant because i love food.
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, really, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 660.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.15094339623 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25427616017 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 210.6 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6005181312 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3333333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0715809446977 0.216113520407 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0280841491435 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439294189682 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0325844019169 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411925848148 0.0580467560999 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.17 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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