Task 1- write a letter to your frend asking for advice for a employment opportunity in his country– say why u r looking for this in his/her country– describe your qualification and skills– ask some questions about salary, culture, benefits etc

Essay topics:

Task 1- write a letter to your frend asking for advice for a employment opportunity in his country

– say why u r looking for this in his/her country

– describe your qualification and skills

– ask some questions about salary, culture, benefits etc

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Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ting a new job has been very difficult. Im thinking of relocating to your country ...
^^
Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... Apart from Bachelors in Sociology, Ive got postgraduate degree in Human Resour...
^^^
Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Human Resource Management. In addition, Im proficient in the use of human resource...
^^
Line 9, column 340, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...least being 7.5 in the speaking module. Ive also enrolled in a French class to help...
^^^
Line 13, column 218, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...y employers and the general population? Id like to know some details about the foo...
^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...ods and weather condition as well. Cant wait to receive details from you. ...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, well, while, apart from, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97685185185 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83604022233 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689814814815 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7792441843 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1875 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144562618812 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0401770991682 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560839452467 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065001005587 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699016299014 0.0580467560999 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.