There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so
on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to the customs of the
country they visit.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are several customes , cultures and practices have been adopted by native people of different countries. This diversification could be easily seen across various countries.In my opinion, it is a good practice to follow the native customs , culture by the visitors during their visit to that country. I have discussed various reasons for this in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, Visitors who adopt the local customs , culture during the tenuare of their stay in the country have been more embraced by the native people incomparison to those who do not pay attention to the native pratices. One can certainly feel more sense of belongingness with the native people if he/she adopts their regional practices. For an instance, native people often invites visitors to their home for lunch who tends to show urge of tasting local cusinies. Hence following the native culture, practices a visitor can enjoy his trip to better extent.
Also, Variety adds a spice to life. By visting the countries of various culture , practices and adopting all these during the stay one can enjoy various taste of life. People can enjoy local festivals , they can taste the native authentic cusine. This will not only add interset to their life but also can help to boost the local economy. For example, United states and European countries accepts the people with various talents from across the world irrespective of their culture, religion who ultimately contibutes to boost the economy of the country.
On the other hand, it is true that nation can benefit from cultural diversity. But visitors should not ignore their roots as well while visiting to other countries. One should know the importance of his own culture and should make effort to promote good things about their culture in other countries during their visit.
To conclude, accepting the native culture plays a key role to make the trip more enjoyful for the vistior and also he is more wlecomed by the local people if he embraces their local practices. But also, one should not forget about his own cuture , good practices duriing their stay in an another country.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 26.3917525773 186% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 937.175257732 189% => OK
No of words: 350.0 206.0 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05428571429 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49267801651 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502857142857 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 290.88556701 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.2719081109 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.058823529 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5882352941 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153486639674 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548796084357 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484387383392 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915597327808 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298462593873 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 41.2886597938 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.