There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive. Your manager has asked to suggest how the reception area could be improved
Write a letter to your manager
Describe the complaints have been made
Why area is important
How the area could be improved
Dear sir
I am Sanchita Sharma,an assistant manager of your company. I am writing in response to the implications that you asked to improve our reception area.
As you must be aware,many visitors showed their dissatisfaction with our reception area and most of the complaints were in regards to congested area. This section is so confined that visitors do not get a sufficient space to enquire. Also, they raised their concerns that one receptionist is not able to serve them promptly and due to which they have to wait for a long.
Needless to say,reception is an important area which represents the image of an organisation and imprints the mark on the visitors.
Taking everything into consideration,it is highly recommended to enlarge the area by annexing the additional space to it. It would be beneficial to hire one more receptionist.
I hope you would find my suggestions worthy to implement and intact the company’s reputation.
Yours sincerely
Sanchita sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , an
Dear sir I am Sanchita Sharma,an assistant manager of your company. I am...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , many
...eception area. As you must be aware,many visitors showed their dissatisfaction w...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...on area and most of the complaints were in regards to congested area. This section is so conf...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , reception
...to wait for a long. Needless to say,reception is an important area which represents t...
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Line 15, column 37, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... Taking everything into consideration,it is highly recommended to enlarge the ar...
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Line 15, column 51, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended enlarging'.
Suggestion: recommended enlarging
...rything into consideration,it is highly recommended to enlarge the area by annexing the additional spa...
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Line 23, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...'s reputation. Yours sincerely Sanchita sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32075471698 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23656867147 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9004178249 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290518063538 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954297198081 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726042862412 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124001586716 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733246009116 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.