In some countries marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases people choose their own marriage partners. Discuss both systems
Marriage is a union and commitment between two individuals in an interpersonal relationships. The marriage varies across the world in regards to culture,religion et cetera. In some countries,an important decision like marriage are arranged by the parents of the couple or by other elderly members of the family. While others view the marriage as a matter of personal choice of the couple.
However,the benefits of arranged marriage are several folds. To begin with, family support aid throughout the relationship which ensures a better conjugal life. Also,in the case of any quarrel or fight, elders make compromises and advises and help the couple to lead a companionship. Moreover,the play of ego is very less in the arranged marriage. Both the people are highly prepared to work in harmony towards attaining their future goals.
On the other hand, culture of love marriage or choosing a partner by their own is followed in western countries. Most people do not agree with the idea that their parents have the right to choose their partners. They claim that not selecting the marriage partner is a violation of their fundamental rights even if they make a bad decision.
Although the figure show that arranged marriage are more successful than love marriage because of the involvement of parents and society in deciding the partner for the person,the possibility of divorce diminishes to keep their respect.
To conclude,people should never be forced into the marriage. Choice of couple and advice of parents are taken into consideration to lead a happy and harmonious relationship of the couple.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22868217054 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99381661503 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6562487281 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418957798306 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118540715347 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805139352056 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194905149465 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898925432957 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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