There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks.
Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter
• describe what the problems are
• explain how these problems are affecting you
• suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear sir,
I am writing to complain you about the faulty bus services that the people in Jal Vihar colony are enduring past a fortnight and to discuss its egregious consequences on the local people.
First and the foremost, the main issue is the disturbed time-scheduled of buses especially during the rush-hours. The buses are running approximately 30-40 minute late resulting in overcrowding of buses. Moreover, the otherwise immaculate buses are now smelling stale, for the litter has not been collected properly from these buses. Lastly, the conductors of the majority of buses are impolite and tend to engage in an argument.
These difficult situations have caused immense trouble to the natives, myself included. Delayed transportation will conspicuously hamper the punctuality of an individual and I am no exception. My office timing starts from 9 a.m, and in spite of leaving my premises at 7:30 a.m, I reach late. The unbearable smell and rude auxiliary staff of the buses adds to my mysery.
I would like you to operate increase number of buses in our locality and kindly acknowledge that they run on time. Also, since it is a mode of public transport the municipal cooperation should maintain buses in pristine conditions. I would also suggest you to instruct conductors to behave themselves when in duty.
Yours faithfully,
Jipsa Jadwani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...oreover, the otherwise immaculate buses are now smelling stale, for the litter has not been coll...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, moreover, so, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21363636364 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94043834929 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9369928572 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2307692308 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0553551614097 0.216113520407 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0196166372195 0.0766984524023 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277997476005 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0270004917115 0.12726935374 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019318553119 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.