Though modern life is much facilitated by automobiles, it would have been better if they were not invented. Do you agree with this statement?
Modernity is wedded to convenience, luxury and comfort, so an exponential rise in number of cars on the roads can be seen today. Nevertheless, some people wonder would it have been more beneficial if the cars and other four-wheelers were not invented. I disagree with this thought as it is one of the greatest inventions of mankind which serves the same in various ways.
To embark on, although it is irrefutably one of the prime contributors of air and sound pollution, it also intend to save human lives in many life-threatening situations. To illustrate, an ambulance, a fire truck, and a patrol car are imperative in any emergency circumstances, which conspicuously shortens the time-lapse commuting to the near-by hospital, a building on fire, or a crime scene respectively. Without this creation, many lives which could have been otherwise saved easily would be lost unfairly.
Moreover, automobiles has been inextricably intertwined with the lives of a majority of people. We use them for far-flung purposes from travelling to work comfortably to purchasing groceries to picking up a child from school to going for a picnic at our convenience. In addition to this, cars protect us from the unfavorable weather making it possible to go outside in these conditions. For example, a cooling and heating system instilled in almost every vehicle assist an individual to beat the sun and winters respectively.
Although I agree that life without four-wheelers is unimaginable, I also recommend minimum usage of the same to protect the environment and an individual. Owing to the traffic congestions, which is a major problem in many developed countries, the quality of life and surroundings are depleting. The obnoxious gas emitted from the cars enhance the greenhouse effect and leads to many cardio-pulmonary ailments. A recent study conducted in Delhi reported that smog, caused by overcrowding of cars in roads, has caused numerous new cases of asthma in the local natives.
To reiterate, despite the many skepticisms of this inventory, I believe that it has upgraded the quantum of human life. However, I also think that it over usage of it could cause serious health and environmental problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21629213483 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2057478894 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2999180028 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0625 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141597204055 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449702469327 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505189374053 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0751317156103 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446222213732 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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