There have been some problems with public transportation in your area recently.
Write a letter to the management of the public transport company. In your letter
-Describe the problems
- Explain how these problems are affecting the public
- Suggest some changes that could be made
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to draw your attention regarding a problem I regularly encounter when I use the public bus, in which I dwell. The main problem is that I am always arriving late at workplace due to the bus is always coming late to the station. Unfortunately, not only does this occur to me but also to all people living here who commute by the public bus.
Because of the constant arriving after expected, our companies have submitted emails inform us as a warning to relieve of our duties, if we did not tackle this issue.
I trust you can empathize with my situation. Thus, I am expecting you to take immediate action by increasing the number of buses to be in the service. I believe this will address the problem because the original rationale for this problem is that there is few number of buses travel in our area.
Your timely attention to this matter is greatly appreciated,
Yours sincerely,
David Peter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 257, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'few numbers'.
Suggestion: few numbers
...onale for this problem is that there is few number of buses travel in our area. Your ti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65497076023 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56917563666 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643274853801 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.6289449759 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180996840223 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704861014235 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595462285345 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851334138544 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581988523035 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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