Many people like to wear fashionable clothes.
Why do you think this is the case?
Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
As the world evolves, the standards of life have improved, so that a vast majority of people have a predilection for wearing fashionable clothes. Hence, a question is raised about the original rationale behind this phenomenon, and whether it has beneficial influence or serious repercussion. This essay will explain the reasons for this trend and highlight its impact.
To begin with, acquiring confidence is one of the primary causes to dress modern attire. To enumerate, when people incline to keep up with the latest fashion, their outward appearance will be improved, so that they create a favourable impression on others, which contributes to having self-assurance. As a result, by virtue of gaining self-confidence, not only can individuals blend in with the community, but they might also earn more friends.
Nevertheless, although wearing fashionable clothes assists in developing confidence, it has detrimental effects. This prevailing trend is more likely to draw youngsters’ attention because they could spend hours to check online the latest modern summer outfit so that they are preoccupied with enhancing the personal image that might lead to distracting them from their study. For example, in Egypt, public schools enforce strict rules on those who infringe the regulations by wearing different attire from the uniform of the school.
In conclusion, leaving a good impression is a predominant factor resulting in the predisposition to dress modern attire. Notwithstanding this coveted impression, the adverse implication cannot be overlooked, of which shifting students focus from the study to keep up with the latest fashion is the most apparent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... highlight its impact. To begin with, acquiring confidence is one of the prima...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55859375 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1436916581 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8847179101 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.363636364 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159683030126 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578173935917 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418418025044 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0965470842893 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556171649275 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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