Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the poor dressing room facility at the City Sports Center, and my dissatisfaction with the response against complaints which I raised earlier to the concerned staff.
The lockers which are available at the facilities’ dressing room do not have locks. Which creates a problem for me, because whenever I go to the center there is no safe place to keep my belongings. I really cannot leave my things at home, such as a wallet, wristwatch, and mobile phone.
I brought this to the attention of the reception staff a few weeks back and the person on duty assured that he would notify the maintenance team. However, until this time, I am unable to see any progress on the matter.
I would highly appreciate it if you could fix this as early as possible, and meanwhile, an alternative must be provided. Probably, someone who could look after the belongings of the members, especially during the games time.
I will be thankful if you could take the necessary action.
Yours sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86813186813 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7836490166 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697802197802 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.5861704097 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4444444444 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164273074184 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517509692917 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501340057807 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758954876509 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624938411467 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.