There is a problem in the road outside your house.
Write a letter to your local Councillor. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain what the problem is
tell the Councillor what you would like to be done
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention a road maintenance issue just outside my house on North Road.
My name is Ayoub. I have been a resident at number 10 North Road for over 10 years, and I have never had a reason to complain to the council before.
Recently, a pothole has appeared on the side of the road closest to my house. When it rains, the pothole fills with water and becomes an invisible danger to drivers. It is also an eyesore to those of us who live in the vicinity.
I have called the council office on several occasion to report the problem, but nothing has been done. I would like to request that you address this problem personally and ensure that it is treated as a priority by the road maintenance department.
Looking forward to the problem being resolved.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring to your attention a road maintenance iss...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: 'several occasions'.
Suggestion: several occasions
... I have called the council office on several occasion to report the problem, but nothing has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60264900662 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47733464947 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662251655629 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7330804039 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212452116819 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077436493497 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669022464572 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101987084909 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648243960206 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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