There is a problem in the road outside your house.
Write a letter to your local Councillor. in your letter
- Introduce yourself
-Explain what the problem is
-Tell the councilor what you would like to be done.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention a road maintenance issue just outside my house on North Road where I was living over 10 years.
My name is Ayoub. I have been a resident at number 20 North Road over 10 years, and there was no reason to complain to the council before. Nevertheless,we noticed a problem with the road works exactly closest to my house since few weeks, and it becomes deeper day-by-day due to the heavy trucks.
Although the road has just been completed by the assign road Contractor, a pothole has appeared on the side of the road. If it rains, the pothole will fill with water and become an invisible danger to the drivers who live in the vicinity. It is also an eyesore for those who live around.
I have called the council on several occasions, but nothing has been done. So, I would request that you address this matter personally with the road maintenance department and that you treat it in priority to get it solved soonest possible.
Please let me know when the problem being resolved.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 9, column 218, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'solved the soonest'.
Suggestion: solved the soonest
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68062827225 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48939528713 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0197038321 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2727272727 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158223704083 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578862962465 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520466050094 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792880992421 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309317485722 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.