There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English-speaking country. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
explain what happens at the party
describe the tradition and why it is important in your country
say why it is important for your friend to be there
Dear James,
I’m writing to invite you to be my guest on the biggest festival of India, Diwali, this year. Diwali is a special day for Indians. On the day of Diwali, people decorate their houses with glittering bulbs, do traditional paintings on the floor in their backyard with special colours and visit their friends and relatives to wish a prosperous new year, as according to the Indian culture, this day is the last day of the Indian calendar year.
It’s the most incredibly popular and important festival in my country, as there’s a folklore that Lord Rama returned to his palace on this day after 14 years in exile. People, therefore, have a tradition of celebrating this day with great joy and love.
I know you are a lover of art and culture. Why don’t you come this November end and enjoy the festivities with us? I am sure you’ll be blown away by witnessing the celebration!
I hope you can make it this time and be part of our celebrations.
Yours lovingly,
Mayur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 828.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73142857143 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61183491681 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645714285714 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.1173489541 44.8134815571 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129659718898 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622884997877 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532017658684 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0618204149382 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151077035194 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.