Write a letter a restaurant manager to organise a party.
Why you want to give party
What special arrangement you will need
Any relevant questions
Dear sir,
I would like to host party because this week and on 12th June my daughter will turn one year and that will be very special day for our family and I would like to capture that all moment for life time.
I would you like to inform you I need one hall for cake cutting and celebration and also require Bank which has a capacity of 55 peoples for dinner. My party time will be 8 PM to 11 PM and I need to lighting decoration for hall. I would you like to enquire about dinner food and I mostly prefer Chinese in south Indian vegetarian food.
I would you like to request for cost of dinner dishes and entire arrangement. kindly let me know a suitable time to visit you at your restaurant on the next day so, We can discuss this details.
I am sincerely looking your response very fast.
Your Sincerely,
Mayur Doriwala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...uld like to capture that all moment for life time. I would you like to inform you I ne...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 79, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kindly
...f dinner dishes and entire arrangement. kindly let me know a suitable time to visit yo...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32911392405 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24215058024 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632911392405 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5916660306 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163024631875 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657945585847 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430779344684 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875877917376 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561751623557 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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