Tou just spend holidays at your friend s home and left your wallet there Write a letter to your friend Thank you friend for the holiday Give them instruction how to send it back

Essay topics:

Tou just spend holidays at your friend's home and left your wallet there.

Write a letter to your friend
Thank you friend for the holiday
Give them instruction how to send it back

Dear Kate,

How are you? You can't imagine that how cheerful I'm after spending my last week with you at your beautiful house. It was such a cool stay with you and your lovely family, which I couldn't forget ever. However I'm afraid to tell you that I forgot my wallet at your house. No sooner did I reach home, than I saw that my wallet was not there in my hand bag. Best to my memory, I remember that while doing packing I kept it aside. it would certainly be on the dressing table.

That being said, you have to post it as soon as possible, because it contains all my essential identification proofs and my company identity card. Otherwise, it will become so difficult for me to enter for work in my company. so owing to the far distance I could not able to come again. Take my residence address from one of my proof and send it on the same.

Pay my regards to your parents and thanked again for the mesmerizing stay.

yours lovingly,
Jane

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
Dear Kate, How are you? You cant imagine that how cheerful Im after spen...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ou? You cant imagine that how cheerful Im after spending my last week with you at...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... house. It was such a cool stay with you and your lovely family, which I couldnt ...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...th you and your lovely family, which I couldnt forget ever. However Im afraid to tell ...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ly family, which I couldnt forget ever. However Im afraid to tell you that I forgot my ...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y, which I couldnt forget ever. However Im afraid to tell you that I forgot my wal...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t while doing packing I kept it aside. it would certainly be on the dressing tabl...
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Line 5, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the dressing table. That being said, you have to post it as soon as possible,...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...for me to enter for work in my company. so owing to the far distance I could not a...
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Line 9, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...ked again for the mesmerizing stay. yours lovingly, Jane
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32402234637 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27822023611 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670391061453 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8458661026 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5384615385 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7692307692 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184237072127 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758114340489 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672355763764 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125142367773 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634436252685 0.0580467560999 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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