You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home Write a letter to the council How you heard about the plan Explain how you feel about it Ask for more information about it

Dear Sir,

Greetings of the day! I am Maria Jane, resident of Wax street, Sydney. Through this letter, I want to seek some information about a big shopping centre which is going to be constructed in my locality, next month. As a matter of fact, I learnt about it from a local newspaper, and since then I was excited to explore more about it.

Having said that, I am feeling so relieved after this news because I have to go to the city centre in order to buy my essentials, which consumes about a day. But, this would really help me not only to save my precious time, but my hard earned money also which I am spending on the commuting.

Well, if you provide me some information including the date from which it will be in operation, the items which I could buy from here, and the catalogue includes prices, then it would really help me to shortlist my buying list.

I hope that you would like to give me some information about the newly shopping mall, and your this kind act will be really appreciable.

Yours faithfully,

Maria Jane

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Greetings of the day! I am Maria Jane, ...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eally appreciable. Yours faithfully, Maria Jane
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, then, well, as a matter of fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50261780105 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4568087234 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61780104712 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5404605994 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171179265977 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078419245509 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621966107532 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112889882418 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569151405628 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.