In the last few years, we have seen exponential advancement in technology. Human life has changed drastically in the last 4 to 5 decades, however, I believe the change in the next three decades i.e. by 2050, would be unimaginable.
Firstly, I believe the entire housing system would be transformed. Today's homes will be replaced by smart homes. These homes will be equipped to not just talk with the inhabitant, but also do the chores for them. For example, the cleaning of the dirty dishes or mopping of the floor would be done by the house itself without any human intervention. We will not have to spend part of the day doing these chores anymore.
Secondly, the communication systems would also get revamped. Most likely, we will not be using mobile phones like today. Instead, there would be more advanced communication devices implanted in our bodies. We will be able to talk to anyone at any time using these gadgets within our bodies.
Lastly, the transportation systems would be state-of-the-art. We will not require to waste our time in the traffic for daily commutes or otherwise. There would be sort of flying machines that can quickly transport people to work or back home, or even to the much farther destinations in a matter of minutes.
I believe the best of technology is yet to come, and life will be much more exciting in 2050. We should look forward to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wasting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wasting
...e state-of-the-art. We will not require to waste our time in the traffic for daily commu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 4.92783505155 325% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7875 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76156344104 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5875 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.784456734 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8125 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264903436705 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890842389074 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653709448741 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143006364226 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466735396846 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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