Dear James,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to firstly say thank you for letting me stay at your place as I am highly obliged and secondly to apologize since one of your favourite and precious bowl was dropped by me accidentally and it broke.
Actually, I was preparing lunch for me and my hands were quite oily because of frying potatoes in a wok. Meanwhile, I needed a bowl to transfer those potatoes in it. But when I held a glass bowl kept in the cabinet, it simply got slipped from hands due to the oil and broke down. I can not express my lugubriousness as it was a very expensive and beautiful piece.
However, I had decided to make it up to you as I knew how much you loved that bowl. Hence, you will soon be receiving a parcel which consist of an Italian dinner set of my choice. I hope you will like it and will be able to forgive me.
Thank you for your support. See you soon.
Take care,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear James, I hope you are doing well. I am writing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.20994475138 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34883965165 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8054640423 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312900054605 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103476779837 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893995451502 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200954348695 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901058260708 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.