Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,A)Introduce yourself,B)Explain what the problem is,C)Suggest solutions to the problemWrite at least 150 words.

Essay topics:

Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.

Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,

A)Introduce yourself,
B)Explain what the problem is,
C)Suggest solutions to the problem

Write at least 150 words.

Dear sir ,
I am writing this letter to express any rage towards the loud noise created by the repairing work of the street near my residency.

I am Priyanka Mahadik, residing at palace street ,pant nagar,building no 40. The council decided to built a speed breaker on the street in front of my society. Since last Sunday this work has been started. It is truly annoying for us as it starts early in the morning at 7 am and goes until late night 10 pm. The noise made by the drilling machine disturbs our morning and evening sleep .

I request you to make some alterations in the work timing so that our sleep is not disturbed .

I look forward to hearing from you.kindly do the needful

Yours faithfully ,
Priyanka

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...indly do the needful Yours faithfully , Priyanka
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 602.0 937.175257732 64% => OK
No of words: 129.0 206.0 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51923461578 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.736434108527 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 170.1 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.89371304 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.25 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188846321913 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693294891091 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336667766765 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955235350998 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204968306098 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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