You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have had to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library.-explaining the situation-apologise for the inconvenience called

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You have some library books that you are unable to return as a member of your family in another city has fallen sick and you have had to go and look after them. Write a letter to the library.
-explaining the situation
-apologise for the inconvenience called
-and say that you are going to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing to apologize for not being able to return the books which I have taken from the library last week.

My grandmother is very old and stays alone in countryside. Yesterday she had fallen in the bathroom, while having bath and could not get up. Our neighbours are kind enough ,so they took her to the hospital and consulted the doctor and got a X-ray done. It shows a lower limb fracture, which needs to be treated by applying plaster and strict bed rest.As my parents are out of town and will be back after 2 days, I need to visit my grandmother to take her care untill then.

I am extremely sorry that I have to leave on emergency basis and thus can not come and return the books .I will come and deposit the books as soon as I come back. Most probably I will be back in three days. I am ready to pay the fine which is applicable for the delay.
Kindly consider my situation in a positive way. Thanking you in anticipation.

Yours sincerely,
Priyanka.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to apologize for not being ...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... library last week. My grandmother is very old and stays alone in countryside....
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t get up. Our neighbours are kind enough ,so they took her to the hospital and con...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...spital and consulted the doctor and got a X-ray done. It shows a lower limb fract...
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Line 5, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...by applying plaster and strict bed rest.As my parents are out of town and will be ...
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Line 7, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...d thus can not come and return the books .I will come and deposit the books as soo...
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Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...thus can not come and return the books .I will come and deposit the books as soon...
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Line 8, column 30, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e delay. Kindly consider my situation in a positive way. Thanking you in anticipation. Yours...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, thus, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39673913043 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40916624464 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663043478261 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0442977033 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5454545455 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160996203057 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590006779955 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591702828609 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105419790136 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474091515782 0.0580467560999 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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