Write an application letter to an organisation working with children to volunteer for a part-time job. Please say
-why do you want to work there?
-why are you suitable for this job?
-when will you be able to start?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for a part-time job as a volunteer for your NGO, that teaches basics of computer to the students of government schools.
My friend Ashu is working with you since 2 years and I would like to do the same. Moreover, I believe computer has become a crucial part of our every day chores and your organisation is doing a great work.
I am the best suitable for this job because I am working in the high school as a computer tutor from last 6 years. Hence, I know several techniques to teach pupils hastily.
Although, I have a job to do, I can manage this job on weekends. I would love to start it from this saturday if you allow me. If you can send me the syllabus, it would be great.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rina Shah
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3660130719 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43895087145 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2260338222 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352620324182 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11733192793 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669446225988 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17636983743 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494719696011 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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