Write an inquiry letter to your new employer with a suggestion to hire your friend or relative In your letter say Who is this person Why should your employer hire him her Suggest what job he she should be doing

Hi Sir,
Greetings of the day.!!
I have been recently hired as a data scientist in your esteemed Mind Tree organization and working as a machine learning engineer on remaining useful life project. With regard to, I am writing this letter to recommend a reference candidate to work with me in expediting this project.

I am lagging behind the deadline of client project because of shortage of one more resource to speed up the development part. I am referring one of my close friend Mr. Dhaval Kale who is currently working as machine learning engineer in Wipro organization. We are from the same college and I know his creative mind and intelligence.

As you are aware, the deadline of the project is coming to the end and we have to represent the development part in the next month client call. I entail an experienced and skillful machine learning expert who can render his efforts to complete this project on time. He has done a fantastic job on machine learning in past few years being in Wipro organization and generated a good revenue. He is well trained and adept in handling pressure when critical situation arrives. Moreover, he is well versed at leadership to persuade the clients attention in order to grow the revenue for the organization.

However, I strongly recommend to hire and appoint him as a machine learning developer. To my best knowledge, he is the right and intelligent person who can help me drive the project in time. Moreover, I assure you I will be accountable to accomplish this project before the given time line.

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours Faithfully,
Pythonistas

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to engineer'
Suggestion: to engineer
...ation and working as a machine learning engineer on remaining useful life project. With ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to engineer'
Suggestion: to engineer
...s currently working as machine learning engineer in Wipro organization. We are from the ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 532, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'clients'' or 'client's'?
Suggestion: clients'; client's
...ll versed at leadership to persuade the clients attention in order to grow the revenue ...
^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... soon. Yours Faithfully, Pythonistas
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, well, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 279.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90322580645 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85074022878 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 290.88556701 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1799268334 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53333333333 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149994822582 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507426426618 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507872932548 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570549238007 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591200063298 0.0580467560999 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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