You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper You want to apply for the job Write a letter to the manager of the company In your letter provide information about yourself give details of your previous work experience say why the company should consider

Dear Sir,
Greetings of the day.!!
I have recently come across a job advertisement in the Times of India newspaper. With regard to, I am writing this letter to apply for software developer position at your esteemed company.

My name is Amar and I am 25th years old. I am lately residing with my elder brother in Pune. But, I would like to move to Bangalore to work in your company if shortlisted in your interview process. I am very enthusiast to learn coding since college days and keen to be flexible to any technology. Besides, I am pursuing my master degree, MTech from VIT university.

However, I have 4 years of experience in Wipro organization, working as a python developer. Furthermore, I am adept in management and leadership level to tackle the development pressure. In addition to this, I have mentored new trainees to train on machine learning and data science trending technology and also accomplished my certification on python as well as machine learning.

I assure you that after my presence in your organization, I will speed up the development process and try to turn manual tasks into automation with the help of python and machine learning. My skills and dedication make me confident to drive each and every part of the given assignments. I can make all the pain areas of manual tasks automate which can save time and manual efforts. This can lead to generate a good revenue. I hope, you will consider my portfolio for this opportunity which would be a valuable asset.

Awaiting your response at your earliest convenience.

Yours Faithfully,
Amar

Votes
Average: 7.3 (2 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to code'.
Suggestion: to code
... process. I am very enthusiast to learn coding since college days and keen to be flexi...
^^^^^^
Line 14, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... convenience. Yours Faithfully, Amar
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.85567010309 389% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96268656716 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93848910157 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9764259667 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2352941176 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 4.34317383033 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186605066567 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055458600177 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589950254451 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883650516963 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644822866328 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 229, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to code'.
Suggestion: to code
... process. I am very enthusiast to learn coding since college days and keen to be flexi...
^^^^^^
Line 14, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... convenience. Yours Faithfully, Amar
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, in addition, as well as, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.85567010309 389% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 937.175257732 142% => OK
No of words: 268.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96268656716 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93848910157 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 290.88556701 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9764259667 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2352941176 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 4.34317383033 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186605066567 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055458600177 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589950254451 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883650516963 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644822866328 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.