Write a letter to the airline company. In your letter
Introduce yourself.
Complain about the delay
Explain the problems that is caused you
Ask for a letter of apology and/or some form of compensation.
Dear Sir or Madam,
my name is Neg Shir who recently came back from a journey to Australia.While I have found all the facilities of your airline company satisfactory, Thus far, I wish to lodge a complain about the return flight number 98324 on 21st July which had delayed for 1 day. this demeanor caused considerable inconvenience, not a mere to myself but also to my employers, as I was due to commence work again the following day. Actually it almost costs my job. Your company brochure, which motivated me to choose this airline, indicated any delay on flights would be recompense. Given this fact that this foul-up occurred without any customers announcement was entirely the fault of your airline, I feel that a compensation in the form of a complimentary ticket of the same distance would be warranted. I can be contacted at the address supplied. Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciated.
Your faithfully,
Neg Shir
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, my name is Neg Shir who recently came ba...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...y came back from a journey to Australia.While I have found all the facilities of your...
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...satisfactory, Thus far, I wish to lodge a complain about the return flight number 98324 on...
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Line 5, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... 21st July which had delayed for 1 day. this demeanor caused considerable inconvenie...
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Line 5, column 621, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customers'' or 'customer's'?
Suggestion: customers'; customer's
... that this foul-up occurred without any customers announcement was entirely the fault of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so, thus, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98113207547 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03877086942 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.704402515723 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.1729126441 44.8134815571 203% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100949705121 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379937413714 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300994700427 0.0603063233224 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972767380149 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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