Write a letter to the bus company about something you lost on a bus. In your letter, give details of your bus trip, tell them what you lost, and explain what you'd like them to do.
Dear Sir,
I am one of your regular customers from my home to office. I am writing this letter to track my bag which one is containing some important documents that I have missed today morning.
Generally, I travel from Indira Nagar to BTM Layout through 286 B bus. Today, unfortunately too much crowd so I am unable to secure the seat in order that I placed my bag on the luggage carrier. I was in hurry to step down to my destination at that moment I totally forget to lift my bag what I realized after reaching the office.
I would request you to check the bus driver or conductor about an unclaimed bag. It was black color leather bag and two buckles. Also, front and a brand name Safari on it. I will be grateful if you can contact on below-mentioned contact number for any information about the loss.
Thank you for your anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
John
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| 2018-12-24 | fatemehbagheri | 71 | view |
| 2018-05-14 | JOHN JEYARAJ | 48 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...g this letter to track my bag which one is containing some important documents that I have mi...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: this morning
... important documents that I have missed today morning. Generally, I travel from Indira Nag...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'buses', 'busses'.
Suggestion: buses; busses
...ndira Nagar to BTM Layout through 286 B bus. Today, unfortunately too much crowd so...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62264150943 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67345167435 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710691823899 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7223435991 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.8181818182 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4545454545 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180322422729 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677720941758 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063444953449 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111730474166 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550784941284 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.