Dear Sir,
I hope your day is going great. I'm writing this letter to inform you about changing the topic of my presentation at the upcoming conference.
I've decided to change my previous topic which was entitled "Music Marketing", because good morals are lacking in the society we live in today. There's a dire need to teach individuals the benefits of portraying positive attitudes, so we can all impact our environment in a good way. Positivity is key! Self development is great!
The new topic I would present is entitled "Your Attitude Determines Your Altitude". According to my late Dad, a good name is better than riches. Integrity will stand the test of time; I'd be direct while presenting because everyone needs to know this hard truth for themselves. We have a lot of youths that are not paying attention and are missing the mark, so it's expedient that they hear what I have to say.
Please endeavour that I have a microphone and a speaker. In addition to the request I made earlier, I'd also love to have a marker and a drawing board. This will be enough for me to commence on that day.
I hope to hear from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Grant.
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 73
- Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown In your letter say When is the best time to visit Recommend someplace to stay Invite her him to your house 67
- you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit write a letter to your friend In letter explain the important event apologize for the situation suggest a new arrangeme 61
- you have arranged a visit to close friend in Canada but an important event at home now means you will have to change the dates of visit write a letter to your friend In letter explain the important event apologize for the situation suggest a new arrangeme 73
- some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centres while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution discuss both sides and give your opinion I need to score 7 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84629884097 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66028708134 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1480182545 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0769230769 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306758653847 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905529317025 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936233292116 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159680171574 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122750418083 0.0580467560999 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.