It is said by some people that the government should put health care first while others are saying that their expenditures should be on other relevant priorities. In my opinion, I believe individuals will live a healthy life if the government considers the healthcare system in the society first, and prioritizing other important matters will still help improve the overall economy.
On the one hand, when the healthcare system in a country is prioritized, it's citizens will enjoy living healthily. In other words, new kinds of diseases can be prevented given that our leaders focus mainly on caring for the health of its citizens. In China, for instance, the people enjoy the benefits of a healthy life because they have world-class health facilities situated in different parts of the country. Clearly, if the government mainly focuses on healthcare, then everyone can enjoy the glorious benefits of living a healthy life.
On the other hand, it is important that the authorities should focus on other relevant matters such as education and construction of roads. This is because paying close attention to these areas will help improve the economy of any country. Nigeria, over the years, to exemplify, have developed to become the giant of africa mainly because we have invested in education, and we enjoy the abundance of good road network. All these have brought foreign investments our way. Thus, focusing on other priorities like building roads and creating conducive educational systems will definitely help improve the country's economic state.
To conclude, the government's focus on healthcare will promote a healthy lifestyle for its citizens, and also focusing more on other relevant matters like education and road construction will help boost the economic value of that society.
- Some people think students in primary school secondary school should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill Do you agree or disagree 67
- You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for Write a letter to your manager to apologize for this absence In your letter Tell your manager what event it was Say how important the event was State the reasons for your absence 73
- Some people think students in primary school secondary school should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill Do you agree or disagree 61
- some people say government should subsidised the fruits and vegetables to make healthy food cheaper Some other say it should be tax to unhealthy food discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Your friend is visiting your town Write a letter to give him her some suggestions on places to visit and where to find cheap accommodations In your letter you should When the best time to visit your town is Where the interesting places to visit are Where 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, then, thus, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3041958042 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73820875352 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3346982566 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.416666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209682744631 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809370405925 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103469538911 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135031250333 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994553449907 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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