Write a letter to a company asking for a refund for something you bought from them online. In your letter including:
What you bought?
What the problem is?
Why you want a refund?
To the management of the Djicala,
I am a regular patron of your online shopping website and am writing to you regarding the impaired product which I received for the third time last week. Allow me to elaborate on my situation.
Last week, I bought a learning French DVDs from your company. As usual, I received this by your regular post. However, when I opened it, I realized that there is a crack on that. I spoke to one of your supportive staff then they changed it after two days. But, unfortunately, when I came to use it, I noticed they sent me the wrong one in this time. I rang again and explained that this is an intermediate level while I requested an advanced one. Finally, they resent me other DVDs which were not French courses. This, as I am sure you can understand, is intolerable.
Thus, I expect immediate refund as I do not need those DVDs anymore. Also, I anticipate you to reprimand the members of your team responsible for allowing such an oversight to happen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...ron of your online shopping website and am writing to you regarding the impaired p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, regarding, so, then, third, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54748603352 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68513495971 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63687150838 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.360824742268 554% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8283258574 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158625040241 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507953683755 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551558190618 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880844893019 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585436951288 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.