Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation.
Dear Sir,
My name is Truong Nguyen, who is currently a resident of Phu My Central community. I am writing this letter to inform you that there were some individuals who let their dogs freely wander around this community’s private park this morning.
At around 6 am, I had encountered some dogs running wildly without any muzzles while I was taking a walk. During that time, there were some people doing morning exercises in the park and were disturbed by the dogs’ bark. Not only that, these pets also scared people when they charged at them aggressively and made other joggers in the area panic. I myself was chased by one of these dogs. Therefore, in behave of all neighbors, I am entitled to request an investigation to find out whom these pets’ owners are and sent strict warnings to these individuals in order to bring a more safety environment for this community. I hope that you will take actions for this situations as soon as possible.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Truong Nguyen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 669, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
.... I hope that you will take actions for this situations as soon as possible. I am...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87709497207 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69920871024 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698324022346 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3231826523 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128027827472 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418383310554 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606697155382 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726604370249 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545170626182 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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