You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter1) explain why you have moved.2) describe the new house.3) Invite your friend to come and visit.
Dear Tom,
I hope you’re doing well. i’m just writing to let you know that i’ve just settled in a house in district 7.
As you’ve known, i’ve just got my dream job in this district. But, I was really afraid to travel 40 miles on my motorbike every day to work. Fortunately, I was lucky enough to have my parents support me with a new house so I wouldn’t have to commute that far.
The house is on Tran Van Luong avenue so it’s extremely easy to find. It has a living room, a bedroom, and a bathroom. it’s quite small I must say, however, I don’t need a big house at the moment and this one is decent enough. What’s more, it’s surrounded by many bars and parks to hang around at night.
i’m having a celebration dinner this Saturday night with my parents and I was wondering if I would join us. you’re my best friend and I really hope you could celebrate with me and my family. Also, I want to show you a little about the house even when it’s very tiny.
All the best
Truong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
... Tom, I hope you're doing well. i'm just writing to let you know that i&a...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It&apos
...living room, a bedroom, and a bathroom. it's quite small I must say, however, I do...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
...s and parks to hang around at night. i'm having a celebration dinner this Satu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56544502618 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61595746601 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638743455497 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1767456262 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0769230769 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102448663294 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416128332717 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451804225293 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768804020598 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466699590671 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.