Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run wildly causing a dangerous situation.

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Pavitar Singh Hari flat no. 12 living in 76 Green Flat Avenue.I am writing this letter to inform you that some adolescent let their dogs run widely which causing abrupt condition .These dogs treat the local people and also dangerous for kids playing in the premises.

Further on ,Today morning these dogs create problem for the people doing jogging and the morning walk as the dogs run behind the people and bark loudly which is so chronicle and un bearable .One dog start chasing me i save my self by hiding myself in the local shop.

SO At End, request you to check the situation and take some appropriate action against adolescents so that we can protect the local people from damage and provide them the fear free environment for there daily exercise and other activities.

I am looking for your reply as soon as possible.

Yours Sincerely,
Pavitar Singh

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 26.3917525773 42% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83116883117 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30335576908 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701298701299 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.575522634 44.8134815571 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.0 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23690287746 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869620459655 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122876724451 0.0603063233224 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118545721741 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110726443961 0.0580467560999 191% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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