Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased Include Why you bought it What you liked and disliked about it Suggestions for improvement

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the editor to give your opinion about a magazine that you purchased. Include:

• Why you bought it
• What you liked and disliked about it
• Suggestions for improvement

Submitted by kjot_59 on Wed, 04/01/2020 - 23:08

Dear Editor,

I am a regular reader of your monthly magazine “Current Affairs”. I am writing this to provide you honest feedback.

I am a UPSC aspirant and I use to read your magazine every month. I was not earlier aware of this magazine but I joined an institute they gave me a list of books that could help me in my studies. There were lots of magazines name which confused me hence, I took the guidance of my tutor and she suggested to me your magazine.

The way of providing adequate information is appreciable. It provides relevant material as per the government exams are concerned. Overall, I like your magazine and suggest to everyone who is preparing for the exams.

The only drawback is its printing quality. The quality of the print is quite low which makes it difficult to read the text. So, please make sure that the quality of printing should be good enough to ready.

Thank you for bringing out such a magazine. I appreciate your this act.

Yours Faithfully,
Jot

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...this to provide you honest feedback. I am a UPSC aspirant and I use to read yo...
^
Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...feedback. I am a UPSC aspirant and I use to read your magazine every month. I wa...
^^^
Line 6, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... use to read your magazine every month. I was not earlier aware of this magazine ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74857142857 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66266093698 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5368265457 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3571428571 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187265358996 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619458524211 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635338910479 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100636813137 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609058668865 0.0580467560999 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...this to provide you honest feedback. I am a UPSC aspirant and I use to read yo...
^
Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...feedback. I am a UPSC aspirant and I use to read your magazine every month. I wa...
^^^
Line 6, column 67, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... use to read your magazine every month. I was not earlier aware of this magazine ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74857142857 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66266093698 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5368265457 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.3571428571 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187265358996 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619458524211 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635338910479 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100636813137 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609058668865 0.0580467560999 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.