Write a letter to an english-speaking friend. In your letter
-You have recently moved
-describe the new house
-invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Frank,
How are you? It's been a long time since we catch up! Anyways, I'm writing to let you know that I moved to San Francisco and bought a new house there.
Actually, I got a promotion the previous month at my job and my manager offered me the role of Assistant Manager of the branch in San Francisco and I said yes!
My new house is very sophisticated. It has three-bedrooms out of which one is the master bedroom, the other two are for children and their study room. It's very spacious in size. It has a very beautiful lawn and having so many plants in there.
Since you are staying in New York, it won't take to so long to come over and visit our new house. I am organizing a small reunion at my new house coming weekend so, you have to come.
I look forward to seeing you.
With Love,
Riaan.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Frank, How are you? Its been a long time since ...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...a long time since we catch up! Anyways, Im writing to let you know that I moved t...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Anyways, Im writing to let you know that I moved to San Francisco and bought a ne...
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Line 13, column 161, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: spacious
...children and their study room. Its very spacious in size. It has a very beautiful lawn and havin...
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Line 25, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k forward to seeing you. With Love, Riaan.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 677.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33974358974 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33801305866 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 290.88556701 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7476456902 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173148025085 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621353618389 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605508113983 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886221278701 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0720413463807 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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