Write a letter to this friend and:
thank him/her for the hospitality
describe your watch and where you could have left it
suggest a way how to get it back
Hi John,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health. I'm extremely thankful to you for making my weekend so enjoyable. The hospitality provided by you and your family was seriously incredible which is forcing me to visit your place again.
While I was unpacking my bags I noticed that my watch was missing. I searched both suitcases and handbags but didn't find it anywhere. Suddenly I remembered, I had taken it off while taking a bath at your place on the day of departure and most probably I had kept it in the bathroom cupboard. As you might already know, it is a white Tommy Hilfiger watch which was gifted by my brother on my birthday.
I request you to please look for it and if you will find it then kindly put it in your possession. My cousin Aman is visiting Amritsar next week and he will collect the watch from your place.
Wish to see you all soon.
Yours loving,
Prabh
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-09-29 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...r finds you in the best of your health. Im extremely thankful to you for making my...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ing me to visit your place again. While I was unpacking my bags I noticed that ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...earched both suitcases and handbags but didnt find it anywhere. Suddenly I remembered...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5119047619 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42889236908 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0821209216 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.9090909091 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174089055022 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709993740977 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458030106434 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107702594492 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609760214955 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.