Write a letter to a friend to ask for his/her help to collect money for a charity organization. The letter needs to cover the following details:
-Why do you want to collect money for the charity organization
-Ask for your friend to help
-Explain in detail how your friend can help
Dear Ben,
Hope this letter finds you in the pink of your health. it has been a long since we last met. I am writing this letter in reference to ask for your monetary help regarding a charity organisation. Let me explain in detail.
As you are aware, I have been involved in voluntary work with several social organisations from our university days. it not only provides me personal satisfaction but also helps destitute people who are in desperate need. Lately, I have been involved with a foundation “THE CRY” which is a non-government organisation helping orphans in their education. Although, in the past, they had sound financial partners however recently, some of their partners have refused to provide financial aid. Hence, I am taking an initiative to hold a charity event in my locality therefore, would need your help.
Since you are responsible for heading Corporate social responsibility activities within your company which aims to provide financial aid to many non-government organisations. therefore, I would need your assistance to register this organisation and check internally if any monetary aid can be provided within this year.
Looking forward to your response.
Best wishes
Dannis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...r finds you in the pink of your health. it has been a long since we last met. I am...
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Line 2, column 162, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
...reference to ask for your monetary help regarding a charity organisation. Let me explain ...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...organisations from our university days. it not only provides me personal satisfact...
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Line 4, column 175, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...d to many non-government organisations. therefore, I would need your assistance to regist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29896907216 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06046690015 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675257731959 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4292872482 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0769230769 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197106321005 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680948327198 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878877839843 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120959524132 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.097774356184 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.