Hello Raj,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of sprits. I am organising a party at my house and have selected a Mexican theme to spice it up. We have a regular six monthly office part and this time its at my house, therfore I am trying something new and would like your help. I need your recipe for burito which was the best that we all had eaten in our college.
Even though I gave it a try but some ingredients were either missing or they were overused. In addition to this all youtube videos have different style and there are lot of spices involved which are mostly not available here. So I need your recipe, can you please write all ingredients which is needed and thier alternatives as well. Also i need a step by step action plan so that nothing is missed form my part. Along with this if you can record a video then all my problem will come to end and it will become a piece of cake.
As you know I also love mexican food so I can make it again and feel ecstatic every time. There will be around 10 people, most of them are Indian but two are from US and specially from texas so they know mexican food. Therefore to have a good impression, I am in dire need of your secret recipe. Also here authentic mexican food is very rare and this will help me to surprise everyone in the party.
I am waiting for your reply eagerly. Get some time and try to visit here it will be fun.
Yours Faithfully,
Gunjan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... needed and thier alternatives as well. Also i need a step by step action plan so th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ed and thier alternatives as well. Also i need a step by step action plan so that...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...y from texas so they know mexican food. Therefore to have a good impression, I am in dir...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...od. Therefore to have a good impression, I am in dire need of your secret recipe....
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, well, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1172.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.21582733813 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15858510938 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 127.690721649 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7509527291 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.25 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15865159386 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551314040183 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536306491994 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932444045496 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345122000493 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.