Wedding is the most important part in a person life therefore everyone wants to do it perfectly.Some spend hefty on wedding as it is their life long dream and they can afford it while on the other side this practise put pressure on other families who are not economically wealthy.In this essay we will discuss both views the weather a big fat wedding is fine and everyone should abide by it or marriage should be done as per individual economic status.
Well in country like India wedding defines social status of person and hence many did not think to spent unrealistic amount of money to please society and embark their status on society, for example recently Asia's richest person Mukesh Ambaini's son weeding was held in Mumbai and the total expenditure is excepted to be more than 1 billion dollar.As he can afford such a high profile wedding so it does not affect him and also it becomes a memorable day for his son as well. Marriage is single largest function where all your relatives ,friend and families gather to celebrate your joy so everyone tries to please one and all by providing the best that they can and be a good host for everyone.
On the other hand due people who are not wealthy often get trapped in spending money beyond their limit to have a great weeding and for the same they tend to borrow money which makes them in debt for lifetime just for a single occasion. To honour the social stigma of big wedding often both families indulge in money dispute which in turn affect lives of everyone involved and ruin the life of people involved forever.the concept of dowry is still prevailing in India which add extra burden on parents and the daughters as they take it as a responsibility and take decision which my affect them in later life.
In conclusion wedding should be done according to economic status of both families and instead of spending money it should be given to bride and groom for their future needs so that they can be utilised it to secure their future instead of pleasing society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63333333333 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38537208838 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536111111111 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.2975951904 296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.80348027 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 278.0 106.682146367 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.0 20.7667163134 289% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.1666666667 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180889185449 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855817022748 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412898364047 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106472083618 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389825093855 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.4 13.0946893788 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.04 50.2224549098 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.1190380762 257% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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