Dear Su,
Hope you’re doing well.
I am writing this letter to invite you to my sister (Stacy’s) engagement function held on the 27th of February. I am planning a surprise dance performance for the occasion with all her close friends and would want you to be a part of it. It’s a 5 minute on stage dance performance performing 3 different songs which she likes a lot.
You have been a good mentor and a friend to her. She always looks up to you and your presence will mean a lot to us. Also, Stacy is emotionally attached to you a lot and it would make her day if you turn up for the function.
I have made all the necessary arrangement and would want this to be an unforgettable memory for Stacy.
Hope to see you soon.
Warm regards,
Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 633.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 142.0 206.0 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45774647887 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66082582083 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654929577465 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1115468067 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.3 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101177643961 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387393193811 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429177719995 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.039385506046 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510076492673 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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